Ranters assignment

[Soiled Soul]

It was there my my eyes met with a vision of pure beauty. A girl of slender perfection. With a bright face of natural joy. Her complection dark, her skin tanned in the summer sun. Her eyes a light brown glowing from her brilliance. Her hair the darkest black I had ever seen. But little did I know her heart was a shade darker.

Not sure this is what you really wanted...but its what you got. Let me know

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[ranter]

oh shit, i did not even pay attention to the listings and shit, i thought that the old man was the character description. and in any case, i think that the old man was actually a better idea of what i was trying to hatch. in the sense that you described a character, with this one though, to be brutatily honest i think it is sub-par for you. (funny sidenote, it would be easier if i just told you this now, considering the fact that you are sitting rite next to me eating that smelly fuckin' seafood subway sandwich, but this is more fun) i think that you reached the goal better with the old man piece.

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[Soiled Soul]

Yeah i really didnt like this piece but i wrote it on hostboard specifically to try the assignment. Funny thing is i was thinking about what i wanted to do for your assignment wasnt sure, wrote the old man, then did your assignment. Like i didnt mean for the old man to be the assignment nor did i realize when i posted it. (wait till i get the seafood sandwich farts ill be back)

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